Song - When I was with you

This is a remake on the females perspective on the song "When I was your man- Bruno Mars." I changed it so it's from a female's point of view. When you read it I recommend hearing the instrumental version of the song for your enjoyment. I love the original, and you can criticize as much as you want. I hope this doesn't ruin how you look at the song.

The same bed always feels cold with you around

Our song on the radio always sounds empty inside

When we are with our friends it’s the same as being alone

My heart breaks a little when you say my name

It’s all pain inside

 

You were too young to realize

It better having me

To hold my hand

To ask me to dance

All night with you

 

You should have spent time you had with me

When you had the chance

You should put the music on

And ask to me to dance

And now you lost me

Because I’m not with you

 Anymore

 

You always had your pride,

Your ego, your selfish ways

That’s why I’m not with you

Anymore

I walked out of your life

You made a mess

That’s why i'm never coming back

 

You were too young to realize

It better having me

To hold my hand

To ask me to dance

All night with you

 

You should have bought me flowers

Held my hand

Asked me to dance with you

When you had the chance

Put the music on and ask me to dance

Cause that’s all I wanted

A simple dance

 

Now it’s too late to apologize

For all your mistakes

Don’t worry I will be alright

Because he buys me flowers

He holds my hands

And asks me to dance

And he’s with me when he has the chance

The radio is on and he asks me to dance

He makes me smile

When you never did

He did all the thing you should have done when you were my man

The End

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