Don't ever change

This is a song, which I wrote, for my sister. Her confirmation is coming up in April, which is months away, but I need to know if this is a good song. Please give me feedback, since it will help me a lot. I will be singing it, while playing it on my guitar. Don't feel like you have to hold back, I need both good and bad feedback, of course if you can't think of anything bad, then you don't have to make it up. :D

You came to this world with a bang

You’d roar, scream and shout

You’d make a lot of noise

That hasn’t ever changed

You still yell and holler

You still make a lot of noise

 

You haven’t changed since then

And please don’t, please don’t

I like you just as you are

So please don’t change

I love you for who you are

The bad things and the good

So my sweet, little darling

Don’t you dare change

 

You know how to be a devil

How to be a giant brat

You can be mean and cruel

You can be evil and mad

You can be the biggest demon

But I don’t care, because…

 

You haven’t changed since then

And please don’t, please don’t

I like you just as you are

So please don’t change

I love you for who you are

The bad things and the good

So my sweet, little darling

Don’t you dare change

 

You can be the sweetest

A piece of sugary candy

You’re an angel from Heaven

A good and fair princess

You’re the greatest ever

The best sister in the world

 

So my dear sister,

Don’t you ever dare change

As you can hear I love you

I love you for who you are

I love the bade side and the good

I love the angel and devil you

I just love everything about you

So don’t change, ever, ever, ever

 

Kathrine, don’t ever change

Because I just love you

So stay the way you are

Please don’t change

Don’t change

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