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Story... well... um... How do I put this?

Main character dissatisfied with life. Meets strange man at a bar. Man turns out to be CEO of successful company. Man dies. Main character gets a package in the mail after his friend the CEO dies. Finds an AI on the laptop given to him before his friend's death. AI shows him the remaining work of his friend. Main character now has a choice between two individual worlds and neither looks the same as it did in the beginning. 

Social commentary, and philosophical arguments also a large part of the story... just read the first chapter or two.

http://www.protagonize.com/story/tales-of-the-everlasting/267508

I'm looking for a extremely honest critiquing, any errors you see, and a "ya" or "nah" on if it's worth continuing.

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