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You ask her where you are.

Anita just looks at you and smiles. 

"I can't tell you that just now.  It would be too scary, we don't like scenes, it upsets the balance we have here."

Shes gets up and starts walking down the long dark hallway.  She nods her head at you.  You assume this means you better follow her.

"Anita, right?" You ask as the two of you wind down the twisting hall.


"Yup."

"But you're, I mean, they found you..."

"Lets not get into that quite yet."

The two of you continue walking in silence until you reach a large brown door.

"Now, you're going to have to go in there and talk to Simon.  I'll be waiting out here when you're finished.  All he's going to ask you is how you've lived your life.  You can say you've been good, bad or so-so."

You nod and reach through the door, your mind racing, trying to figure out what to say.

 

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