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...it right! Let me make it right....Just one more chance, one more chance to--"




You stop─





take a look around...






and realization hits.


They've all gone, and your left to stand alone. To wallow in your past. You speak out once more, hoping one will hear. Hoping one will see.

But you see, they can't.
They've long lost faith in your deceiptful ways, your horrible act, and embittered hate.

Your pleas get louder-
But the boat's gone. Gone far away.

Much too late.
You see.

You waited too long to say what you needed.
To change yourself.
To speak all that they just wanted in the first place.
The one thing that would have made it right.
They wanted nothing more than


Truthful 
      honest-

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