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White Angel Black Wings

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01 I'm Sorry (Narrator)

The thundering clouds roared above in the skies. The rain was pouring nonstop for the past week... God was angry.

Up in the heavens, farther away from Earth in time and space itself, angels live and roam. Angels were the pure souls that roam around under the care of God until they were sent to be born. Each lives a life and passes through many trials to determine their life and behaviors on Earth. Once a certain number of years have passed, God would take away the human soul, also known as death. After death, you're gone and will never show up again. In this world, you have two lives, one in heaven, and one on Earth.

Hell served its purpose as a land of eternal suffering. If an angel committed an unforgivable act, they were sent to the underworld. But what was truly terrifying was not because you live in a dark and scary place. It was because you lived an eternal life. Doing nothing in an empty void wasn't the best thing to pass the time with.

And right now, God is angry. Kneeling before him was his most precious child, Kailyn. She was the most beautiful being ever made by the hands of God. However, as always, a balance was needed. As beautiful as she was, there was always an evil asleep inside of her, a deep emotion of hate. It didn't matter how much hate an angel has, they were still pure until they reach the Earth. But it seems things didn't go as planned.

"My child, would you mind telling me why you killed him?" God pleaded and tried to control his temper.

"Father, I have no explanation. You planted this hate inside of me. I just used it because it existed. There is no other reason than that." Kailyn left the altar once again and headed out to the gardens. Slowly but surely, her white wings began to darken with her growing hate.

"Oh I give up. There's no other choice. I'm sorry..."

The End
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Yuuki An unexpected turn of events happens when an angel killes her lover. A love tragedy awaits or will it be a happy ending... Just like a fairy tale... Let's join Kailyn as she suffer her worst or best fate yet.
Character name (Pages written in their POV)

Narrator (5)
Me!!! ^_^

Kailyn Hamlet (5)
Protagonist. Long and wavy hazel brown hair and golden brown eyes. A female fallen angel who lost her trust from God. Has some connections with Raymond.
Release: Sacrificial Beast -- She offers her soul to a creature to fight with her. Her body is suspended on a cross throughout the fight, her weak point. The name of her wolf is Sherman.

Aaron Silvette (5)
A male fallen angel. Short choppy black hair and deep green eyes. Apparently very similar in facial features and attitude to Raymond.
Release: Double Souled Daggers -- A set of daggers that each contained a soul.
Double Souled Swords -- A set of swords that each contained a soul. The white one is Aiya and the black one is Arai. This release was in the possession of Raymond until he threw them away.

Herman Decker (2)
An old male fallen angel. Shoulder-length white/gray hair and light brown eyes. Very knowledgeable with history containing content.
Release: Pixie Contract -- A little pixie appears. It has more defense and healing spells rather than fighting magic.

Raymond ? (2)
A character of mystery for now. He seems to have affected Kailyn in some way during her time in heaven or hell.

Terrence (Terry) (5)
An Alpha. Met Kailyn during her time in hell. Very docile compared to other Alphas. Is this information true, no one knows... There are too many secrets.
Human look: Medium-length black hair and deep red eyes. Average male body frame.

Enemies
Frar: An evil being that evolved from an angel that has given up on living in hell. It can also be humans or animals that had sinned or wandered into hell by accident.

Er: An evolved level of Frar. Has the ability to speak.

Dor: There is a new ability of increased speed.

Crer: Physical powers are tripled from original. Has a better coordination, and can actually think straight.

Bir: Nearly in its human form, and the power keeps on increasing.

Alpha: Highest class underworld creature. Takes on a human form. Regains the memories of its past.

Thanks for all the support and please comment and rate! *bows*

~Yuuki

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