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by Feeble39 in Fantasy, Mystery added 27 days ago

"Sure, brother, it's 4:20pm. You know what that means!"

"Oh My Gosh!" the goat man screams, "It’s time to go see the Great Gazoo!"

"That’s right", you answer, "so let us embark upon our journey, lest we be late and miss the great entrance!"

You and the goat man hurriedly link arms and begin skipping along the silver brick road leading to the ruby city. Along your way you stop to pick up a couple buddies.

First you stop at the iron mans house and then, with him in tow, you go to get the mannequin.

You decide that going to get the mannequin is a wast of time, after all he is missing his liver.

You fall and stubb your toe, damaging your chicken slippers.

You continue on your way to get the mannequin.

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"whats on an ipod touch? safarie?"

posted 26 days ago by Feeble39

"Might be something funny with the touch screen. I can always update the rating for you if you want, but I haven't seen a browser where I wasn't able to update it yet. What are you using?"

posted 27 days ago by surreal78

"i did, it didn't work"

posted 27 days ago by Feeble39

"No biggie, you can just select a new rating to re-rate it. :)"

posted 27 days ago by surreal78

"noooooooo! i was about to rate this story as great but i was using my touch screen and it messed up! i rated it as horrible by mistake! i'm so sorry! AAAAAHRG!"

posted 27 days ago by Feeble39

"Sorry guys, I was doing a little tweaking last night and stripped out all HTML from postings for a few hours. Limited HTML in postings (whatever you can do in the editor toolbar) should be working fine again now. :)"

posted Dec 29, 2007 by surreal78

"When I used the 'Preview', the story showed up correctly. Then when I posted it, it lost all the formatting, from italics to paragraphs. Should I have written it in HTML instead?

Cheers,
ND"

posted Dec 29, 2007 by NDHH

"I'm just in the process of adding an edit option until someone's posted a follow-up to your branch.. in the meantime, I'll clean those up manually. :)"

posted Dec 28, 2007 by surreal78

"wow, clearly didn't like my spaces or commas in the branches, lol. Hopefully I can fix that."

posted Dec 28, 2007 by Mikey

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