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...left New York some time ago, and surely there was no way Zannetti could find him here? besides how did Vincent know that Zannetti was coming? He had cut all ties from the deal in Brooklyn! Of course he knew his actions would not have been forgotten but he had kept his head down, only told those who were concerned. His brother and Mariana, Vincent's wife! Marcos paused for a moment.

"Where's Maria?"

Vincent sharply turned back to his brother "What the hell has that got to do with anything?"

Vincent’s expression slowly warped as he towered over his brother. Marcos had never seen this face before. a pale look of crazed thought. Vincent began pacing again. "Shut up! Don’t you even dare Marcos! She’s my wife! My wife!"

Suddenly a sharp blundering clatter bellowed up the stair case as Marcos leaped to his feet. The sound of heavy footsteps shock the hearts of the two brothers as the stood frozen, glaring into each others glistening wide eyes!

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