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...nd hugged her, and carefully tightened his emberace as she continued to talk.

"Have you seen olivia yet? She hasn't been the same since you left," she continued to talk. She had so much to say to her son. Without him, life had almost ceased to exist, but now there was finally something for her.

Suddenly, she realised there was another pair of footsteps. However, these were not happy footsteps. They carried sorrow and resentment.

"Hello, who's there?" she asked with concern.

"Hello ma'am," the voiced replied in painful tone. "I am here with news about your son."

In almost a surreal panic, she she rose to her feet. She knew.

"Captain Takuya Aizawa," he paused, "Gave the ultimate sacrifice and died in the line of duty on April 14th."

She crumbled to her knees.

Takuya? she could no longer feel him there.

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