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Under the Cherry Blossom Tree

Hiroshima, Japan

April 10, 1941

The sakura had reached its peak bloom. A gentle breeze was blowing away the petals. Soon all the petals would be gone, giving way to leaves. Before you knew it, all good things came to an end.

Shiori was weeping softly, leaning on Hiro’s shoulders. They had been married only for a few months, and now it was time for him to leave, to serve the country.

Don’t go!” she wanted to plead. She had been dreading this day all along.

From tomorrow, she would be all alone, sharing the memories of her past few months with him, waiting and praying for his safe return, just like the millions of wives around the world on whom the pangs of war had been imposed.

She would wait here, right under this sakura facing the Hiroshima castle by the Otagawa river. She would look up in the sky every time she heard a plane, wondering if her Hiro was in it. Gently wiping the tears in her eyes and brushing the cherry petals in her hair, Hiro kissed her. For a long time, neither of them spoke a word as they were locked in embrace.

In war, men became heroes, and mortals became legends. Heroes of one nation became villains of another. Hiro Namamura hailed from a family of warriors, and even as a child, knew that it was his destiny to serve the Imperial land. As the Sino-Japan war broke out, he had trained to become an Air force pilot and had become the best in his division. Imperial Japan was now expanding and was waging battles in different lands in the Pacific. It was now time to put his training to use for the glory of his nation.

The noise of the Isuzu engine interrupted their thoughts. The driver saluted him as Hiro got in, gently letting go of a pleading Shiori’s hand.

“I will return soon, Shiori, I promise,” he said, in a half-confident tone. She let her tears out uncontrollably as the vehicle sped past her, leaving only dust behind.

How many days, weeks, months or years would it be before I see him again?” she thought."Oh, when will this terrible war end? How many more lives have to be lost before man's greed for power end? How many more wives and mothers will have to shed tears before the leaders' thirst for success is quenched?"

 

Washington D.C, United States

April 10, 1941

The cherry trees on the tidal basin were a gift from the Japanese to mark the growing friendship between the two nations a few decades ago.  How times have changed”, thought Jack Thornton sardonically as he walked past the cherry trees in full bloom overlooking the Washington Monument. With Imperial Japan siding with the Nazis in its quest for dominance in the Pacific, he thought that a threat to the Pacific coast of the United States was imminent, despite assurances by both governments to the contrary.

While Jack Thornton became one of the youngest doctorates with a PhD in Nuclear Physics from Columbia University, his brother Paul went on to serve in the U.S Navy and was stationed at the Pacific Fleet at Pearl Harbor.

With speculations adrift that the United States would join the war any time, Jack too had enlisted his services and had joined his brother in the Navy, but much to his disappointment, he had been asked to report back to Washington instead.

“Please have a seat, Dr Thornton,” the secretary said, gesturing him to a room as he stepped inside the non-descript building a couple of blocks from Independence Avenue. “Dr Szilard will be with you in a moment.”

Dr Leo Szilard?  He wondered. What was his research advisor from Columbia doing here?

The door soon opened and three men stepped in. He recognized his mentor Dr Leo Szilard, while another man with an English accent introduced himself as Dr Fleming. At the far right was a third person in a military uniform.

“Hello Jack! I understand you were at Pearl Harbor,” Dr Szilard smiled at him.

“Yes sir, I wanted to serve the country, but I was informed that they didn’t need my services.” Jack replied.

“Oh, Uncle Sam certainly needs your services son, but just not at the naval base,” the man in the military uniform said. Jack looked at him quizzically as the professors smiled and eyed him keenly.

“So Jack, Dr Szilard speaks very highly of you and of your paper about controlled nuclear chain reactions,” Dr Fleming spoke. “Tell me, do you think it is possible to build a device that would initiate such a mass nuclear chain reaction?”

 

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "Thank you Seldom! Yes, I've been mixing fact and fiction while trying to stay loyal to history. It's a first for me as well. Was trying to see if any history / world war buffs would be interested in continuing from one of these branches. Don't want to continue branching on my own any more!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for seldom "Can see how easy it would be to get bogged down in the detail. Seems extremely well-researched to me - although I don't know anything about it so can't truly comment on that ;)
But it's really impressive Ganga - you're interweaving the facts with the fiction in a way, I reckon, makes them both resonate and become more real, more immediate.
Seriously impressed here lol.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "Thanks for the feedback! Yes, you're right about the challenge in that we all know the outcome of the war. After writing two chapters, I was getting overawed with the history that I found myself losing track of the actual story! That said, the world war has so many "what ifs" that could have completely altered the course of the war, and provide interesting story opportunities.

For instance, the Germans began the nuclear research first, but the Americans, while they were late starters, beat them to it.

Also, it is believed that after the fall of Germany, America and Russia shared the spoils of the German nuclear research, and went on to become the two nuclear superpowers later. What if Germany came closer than we thought in building the nuclear weapon? This was one plot I had in mind - the nuclear race in the midst of the war, along with some drama, espionage etc.

The other plot (which hasn't been branched yet) I thought about is set in the Pacific, featuring Japan where the bombs were finally deployed.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Spuds "I figured I would read some of your stuff, since you are reading mine. I'm impressed. This is well-written. The challenge here, since we know who developed nuclear technology and we know who won the war, is to center the story around people who are swept up in the events of the time. Hmmm. I'll bookmark this story and give some thought to making an addition."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "One more side-note (sorry, can't help it!):

- The Uranverien project was real, but nothing great came out of it, although there is a lot of speculation on how far Germany went in its nuclear plans during the war. I've just made an exaggerated twist out of it for this story.
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "Thanks guys! I've always found the world war stories fascinating and believe that the 1930's and 40's shaped the world we live in today. I hope it doesn't become too daunting! A little bit of wikipedia reading gives all the historical information one needs! Now we just need some characters and a story to build on them!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Bravo.. daunting to follow up on, but that's amazingly well thought out and detailed..."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Jillian "Wow ganga, this is really amazing. This beginning is so fluent and really sets a great scene. Also, your 'rough guidelines' for the different directions are really well thought-out; they both offer some really intriguing possible points of view that could lead to any number of amazing story lines.
I really like the idea of seeing a love story or some sort of drama amidst all the destruction that is to come; gives it a 'real life' sort of feel.
I'm looking forward to reading more, although, admittedly, I'm a little too intimidated to add a branch myself!
Great work!
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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for ganga "Wanted to add some side-notes:

#1 - The letter, as some of you probably know, was real. So the fiction part would have to begin from the next branch.

#2 - I was thinking of weaving a story of characters around the war - common people from across the world who were involved in the war, in the development of nuclear technology, and affected by it.

As such, I've posted two possible branches if anyone is interested in adding to it! One, to Germany where the war has just begun (Sep 1939) and where Hitler is nursing his nuclear ambitions. The second branch goes to Japan (set in the following spring, since I said cherry blossom ;)) with possibly a story of love, drama and heroics where the atom bombs will explode in about 5 years.

These are just some rough guidelines I had in mind. Thanks for reading!
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