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...the hole that housed it.

As Jack leaned further in to examine the ground at his feet suddenly crumbled, and gave way to his weight. He spun around to grab for a branch or anything but his hands closed down on air.

Alex gasped as he watched his friend fall, he was completely frozen unable to move his body.

Jack turned to him and a mock expression of Alex covered his face, then almost what looked like anger to Alex. Though he could hardly be sure as seconds later Jack disappeared into the hole.

Jack watched as the trees spun around suddenly and then there was a loud crack and then there was darkness once more.

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