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...rdquo; he said, menacingly, “you never understood either Alex. What its like to have the power, the power to crush anyone that got in my way.”

He smiled cruelly again his teeth gleaming white.

“Now you’re in my way Alex,” he chimed, “the last person I would have expected. But here we are, you and me, and you’re in my way. So you see I have to kill you because if not, you’ll always be in my way. Always figure out a way to be in my way.”

Alex could see by his face that he was far from having touch with reality. He was a man pushed over the edge, too far gone already for anyone to save him.

Alex closed his eyes tightly, his life began to flash before his eyes, and it took him away from the menacing now to the light hearted months ago, when all this had begun.

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Writers_Block "There I gave you some incentive!"
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Writers_Block "I DON"T EVEN BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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Rac7hel "Oh, I didn't realize you had branched this yet. That email apparently got lost somewhere in the comment war"
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Writers_Block "Woohoo, Villains is back on the up and up"
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Writers_Block "Yeah I know, I'm trying to figure out where to go with it, which branch to take. I originally wrote almost the entire story, so its hard for me to see it in any other direction than what I wrote you know? But I'll figure it out. Haha we seem to be each other's biggest fans :P."
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Rac7hel "Whoops, I hadn't even rated the original Villains. By the way... it's not my turn, I don't want to write on my own branch! ;)"
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Writers_Block "It was a joint effort, it would probably have never made it up there without you Rach"
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Writers_Block "Nice I created a mogul."
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Rac7hel "Villains is currently the top rated story..."
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Writers_Block "Intense!"
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Rac7hel "How about Spectacular?"
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Writers_Block "Excellent....no other words for it"
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Rac7hel "Hmm... I forgot to make it "light hearted." oh well"

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