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I remember peaking through the tiny gap in my bedroom door. The planks were'nt usually fixed close enough, as with the rest of the wooden cabin, so I could see though and hear pretty well. I watched the fire play around on their faces, mischeivous shadows making some of the people unrecognisable, but I could still tell from their voices who they were.

I listened.

And listened.

And listened some more.

Then my eyes bulged. Tears crept up under my eyes and waited anxiously to burst out. Every time I took a breath, my chest shook and wavered, binding back a deep sadness.

All because this was the moment that I found out.

I found out that Lucian, my long-time friend and hopefully almost boyfriend, was my uncle. 

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