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...>The stranger ignored the question completely. "Look, you gotta get out of here and get somewhere far away, man."

"Yeah, I know." It was part of your plan to get far away after you pulled the job but you hadn't expected the other guys to get on your trail so quickly. "But I don't think they saw me come in here; I should be okay for a little while."  You were tired and the pain in your foot was beginning to creep up your calf.

A panicked look came over the stranger's face.  He walked to the middle of the room and moved his face in close to yours, leaning over to make them parallel. "You gotta leave now, man! You gotta leave!"

"Alright! Alright, calm down." The guy was spooked and you had no idea why. "What's the deal, man?"

He was silent for a minute as he walked back towards the door.  With his hand over his forehead in consternation he said,  "The deal is... I was supposed to have killed you already."

Let the guy explain who he is and what's going on.

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