Trooper
I never write forwards in this site usually, but you all have heard a lot about this story; I figured that the right thing to do would be to introduce it properly.
This is Trooper; the holy grail of my writing. This is the story that, I would say, started my major professional take on writing; wanting to go career with it.
This story is a complex build of one main story, with a few underlying stories of past and present to add to the flow and interest. I suppose you could say it is the classic battle of Good VS Evil, with a science fiction twist.
It also explains our legends and mythology. It helps the reader understand the fictional theory of where all those stories of old began.
So sit down, grab a bowl of popcorn, and immerse yourself in what I would like to call my first and my greatest work: Trooper; Enjoy!
The ground trembled slightly and the wind picked up until it was almost bending the trees over; then suddenly it stopped and there was silence.
It was then that the implosion began. The ground shook violently as earthquakes ripped apart the entire surface of the planet. The delicate atmosphere was ripped to shreds as the gravitational pull became non existent.
A vacuum was created as air from the planet was pulled into space taking anything from the surface with it. Trees, houses, people and animals; nothing was safe from the giant vacuum. The planet began to collapse suddenly. Ground gave way to giant abysses and lava spewed up from cracks and mountains.
As the surface of the planet collided with the core there was a tremendous explosion; it rocked the remains and sent pieces of rock spiraling outwards in all directions on a destructive path, which collided with other planets and moons. There was a domino effect of mass destruction; the first sun in the solar system was hit by the largest piece of rock and split in two. Those two fiery pieces spiraled out of control and crashed into other worlds. Planet after planet was hit and destroyed as the biggest planet in the system finally disintegrated into nothingness; dust.
When the destruction was over every planet, moon and sun in the solar system was destroyed, and large asteroids were headed on collision courses for planets in the closest solar systems.
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She watched the chaos from a safe distance through a special viewer built into her shuttle. She was the only human, the only species left from that solar system; soon to be that galaxy. All other humans, aliens, any other creatures were all destroyed.
It was what the Domination had wanted; complete destruction. If one planet disobeyed them they would all suffer, and it had been her idea to start the rebel alliance; to rise up against these monsters. Her idea, and it was her idea that had destroyed them all. Well, all of them except for the Domination; they could not be destroyed that easily. Although, they had probably lost their drones, which meant it would be a while before they could move onto the next solar system.
She was suddenly shaken from her viewing screen; she had to find out which galaxy was next on their course. The Domination drones had discussed it many times as being the one; the end all to be all of galaxies. There was one planet in that galaxy that had the key to their final success and control of the universe; or their defeat.
She pulled out the information key she had stolen from one of the drones and plugged it into her navigation system. Instantly it brought up a Domination crest, which flipped sideways and opened a menu. The language was written in English; as the drones were humans changed to drones, they could not have their speech changed.
She toggled through the menu until she found the information she was looking for. She did not recognize the name of the galaxy; it was named in Domination language the 'Miskius Drane'. In English she could only make out the 'Milky' something.
The menus continued until they came to the planet the Domination was headed for; it was listed as Erathius. This time she knew what it was though, she had heard the drones speak its name many times; Earth, the planet that the key was on was called Earth.
She transferred the map and all information to her navigational system and set the shuttle to auto-pilot. She then flipped the outboard sensors on to detect any Domination ships. She moved to the back of the shuttle and looked into the glass case that held her only weapon against The Domination. Her breath fogged the glass as she stared and she wiped it away to reveal the suit that her father had created to fight against The Domination. It had never been tested never even been worn by anyone; she hoped it would work.
She stared at it longingly for one last second and then moved over to the cot attached to the wall of the shuttle. It had been a long day and she needed to rest during the trip before she reached Earth; she wasn’t going to get much sleep when she got there.
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As the shuttle moved out of orbit and towards Earth the blackness of space fell silent once more. This was only to last for seconds as a ship suddenly uncloaked itself; then another uncloaked, followed by three more. All five were pointed towards the departing shuttle. Although, they did not pursue; they waited silently.
On board the biggest ship a Domination solider was receiving orders; there was complete silence aboard the ship. The Domination had surpassed vocal communication amongst their kind and now were able to speak through telekinetic waves.
They were strangely beautiful creatures; scaly all over and they looked so peaceful, like they could not harm a single creature. The truth though, was that buried beneath their kind and soft exterior was pure evil; blacker than space, blacker than the darkest dark matter was an evil so pure they had no reasoning, no caring and no remorse. They could not feel, and they could not know pain. They only knew a thirst for destruction and domination. The only way they knew to achieve domination was through destruction, torture and chaos.
Their extreme intelligence surpassed that of most species in the entire universe. There were only two other species that were fabled to be alive and above the intelligence of the Domination; and only the Domination knew of these creature's actual existence and location.
The soldier nodded, and outside, the ships moved in the opposite direction of the leaving shuttle. Once again they cloaked and the space was endlessly empty and silent; far off were the lights of explosions as other planets were now being hit by the asteroids of the destroyed world.
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