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...Tomas said carefully.   He moderated his breathing, calmed his mind to keep his heartbeat steady.  The Magisters had highly sophisticated techniques for assessing emtonional conflict and if he were found unacceptable, others would come..  "Only conformity matters.  None will threaten your host while you are here."

Galor smiled then, and leaned back, whistling a cheerful tune with lips not quite adjusted to the action.  Even the Magisters took time to gain full control of their hosts. 

Tomas felt the bottom of his stomach give out.  He recognized the tune Galor whistled.  "Tu Madre" was an ancient war song from the Southern Continent, where his own people had come from.  The words to it were a death sentence under the Hegemony.

This was going to be unlike any prior magisters' circuit he'd overseen.  This one, Tomas figured, must have been sent to test their faith and conviction.

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