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There Might Be Murder

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Angel wandered her usual route into Christopher’s laboratory. Today it was dotted with mirrors among the various usual religious paraphernalia, and the light was half-blinding to her. She stopped by the biggest golden-framed mirror, and peered into its reflective surface. Was it just her imagination, or did that mirror seem to contain images beyond its first layer? Angel could identify a couple of golden apples shimmering in the hazy distance…but those apples seemed also to have silver serpents slithering around, and in and out of the apples.

Puzzled, Angel tried to draw away from the images that, in truth, frightened her very soul, but found that her feet would not obey the instructions she tried to relay to them; it was as though they were stuck to the ground. The snakes slithered in and out and in and out again, casting a mesmerizing pattern into the essence of Angel’s mind. She may not have escaped if it were not for the voice that split through the laboratory that second.

It was not the voice of the owner, as one would suspect, but it was a much lighter and jollier (but less spontaneous and silly) voice.

“Angel,” called Maddy,

“Angel, what on Earth are you doing here?”

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SumnerzAngel Satire/humour, as well as being slightly philosophic and a thrilling adventure! This is meant to be very facetious. I'd love for you to have fun reading and participating in it!

Looking for part-time/one-chapter writers, as my co-writer has abandoned Protagonize, and I'd really like to get back to this story.

It's 'part 2' of The Funny Farm (though technically part 1 hasn't been finished), where the heroines of our 'previous' story are back for more action!
This time, after Angel looks into an enchanted mirror in her mad-scientist-and-sort-of-friend's laboratory, bad things start to happen. It's up to Maddy (and you ;) ) to decide the fate of the entire world!
Please entitle your chapter 'There Might Be X', just to keep with the theme ;)

Also: it's based on a random text message I recieved from FereWillkeepYouAlive!

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