Purpose
"George, George. You were always the curious one. You have adventure as a middle name. You are as always the writer creator. This allows me to show you at long last what it is that you are."
George found the whole idea silly and confusing. A god a creator him; never had he taken that into a consideration as a possibility. He was just a mousy guy with big ears and a forgettable face. This was all to impossible. Things were gonna get much stranger before this conversation ended
George, the old man called his name and it lulled him back to the present...he had felt his mind start to wander and as he did, the world around him had started to grow from the walls, floor, ceiling. Life for him was starting to become very weird and he was starting to feel like a fish out of water.
George, you are a creator and you are most valuable to all that you create. As the designer you are YHWH, you are the writer and you are the "WORD" The old man stated this last with a reverent tone and he smiled.
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All together now: "Slacker!""
Anyways now I'm going off on a tangent. Very well written, you put a lot of effort into your craft. I wish I cared as much as you when writing on this site, but to me all this is just a game to hone my skills.
When it comes to real writing, I always edit the draft at least ten times before letting anyone....tangent again.
Great story, I'll post a branch when I get a chance, and don't worry I will care a little."
Agree writing is fantastic. It sort of reminds me a bit of Tom Holt - only better to be honest. Don't know why youre still here Fal because everything you've donme so far is publishable. If you've been sending it off then you've been really unlucky. And if not why not!!!
I know about this, I worked in the book industry for a couple of years.
:)"
However, I can't hold it against you - most times (at least in my case) it takes months before I release something I've written to the public. There's always something to correct in a story. Always.
Good work though. Loving everything so far.""
Although it was my intention to accelerate it to make the character seem desperate enough to do what he did.
Still fairly new to writing, so bear with me and please, don't hesitate to criticize my stories/branches/chapters in detail. It helps me tremendously.
Thanks Pinch :)"
Thanks for your candor."
Otherwise, once it gets going, the tension lifts ncely again, and it's a very tantalising cliffhanger."
Also, there are some odd turns of phrase that stick out awkwardly. Not sure this effort has helped the story."
I appreciated the feedback. Thanks again."
Please continue, Fal, and I'll try to get into your mindset to write another chapter too."
Love the intrusion of the weird into the everyday setting. Great characters being built up too.
:) Intriguing definitley"
There will be more!"
I've book marked the page, and look forward to your next installment :)"