The Unseen --> The Sucky Version

Part One Of The Series [Four Books] - Reality trips Filomena over and over, no matter how hard she tries. Your typical supernatural-adventure-romance filled with fights, thrills, chills, and a love past anything you can imagine. But this...is the worst book ever. Read at your own caution. "Many people tell me to live life as it is. I'm trying too. I'm starting again hoping this time, my life won't become any more of a nightmare then it already is."

Part One Of The Series [Four Books] -
Reality trips Filomena over and over, no matter how hard she tries. Your typical supernatural-adventure-romance filled with fights, thrills, chills, and a love past anything you can imagine.
But this...is the worst book ever. Read at your own caution.
"Many people tell me to live life as it is. I'm trying too. I'm starting again hoping this time, my life won't become any more of a nightmare then it already is."

I seriously was not kidding about this being the worst book ever. It really is. This was the first piece of work I took seriously and started working on it in the beginning of fifth grade and finished it in the summer of my sixth. At first, I was completely in love with my story but after some time...not so much.

Read at your own caution. This is a mix and mesh of Twilight [blegh, I hate Twilight now], Gakuen Alice and Naruto [I even have Naruto words in here cause I was too lazy to use my own creativity baha]. Not-fun-at-all.

But...the only reason I'm publishing this is cause I'm going to start doing a re-write of it with my brother, it's going to be collaborative. This is completely solo work of mine [no wonder it sucked] and I love the story plot and don't want it to die. So the re-write will be starting soon. And oh, the other reason I published this is because I want to publicize my shame to the rest of the cyberworld. Ha-ha.

Anywayys.

Unhappy reading.

Trish

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