The Unseen --> Rewrite

This is the rewrite of The Unseen. Practically has the same idea and storyline but will be written so that my originally failure of a story has a bit more creativity and freshness to it.
"Life is a strange thing...one minute you're walking along and the next, you're falling deep into an abyss with no chance of coming out of it."

 *This is the rewrite of The Unseen. Practically has the same idea and storyline but will be written so that my originally failure of a story has a bit more creativity and freshness to it.
"Life is a strange thing...one minute you're walking along and the next, you're falling deep into an abyss with no chance of coming out of it."
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Well that's pretty much everything I can say about this. It's a re-write of my novel The Unseen which I'd started working on during the 5th grade and finished in the summer of my 6th. I'd given up on improving it or making it any better or even continuing the series but my brother encouraged me to keep working on it and one thing or another lead me to point where me and my brother are going to do a re-write of The Unseen...together.

He'll be writing the view of Seth and I'll be doing Filomena's. You might want to read the original sucky version to understand this one better so you can read it and actually see the improvement teehee. But its not necessary. =]

Well...I hope you enjoy. The chapters will be slow-moving since we're both kinda busy haha but hopefully, we'll get it finished one day. =P

Love you all.

Trish and Locke

P.S. Here's the link to the old one --> http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-unseen--the-sucky-version

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