*This is the rewrite of The Unseen. Practically has the same idea and storyline but will be written so that my originally failure of a story has a bit more creativity and freshness to it.
"Life is a strange thing...one minute you're walking along and the next, you're falling deep into an abyss with no chance of coming out of it."*

Well that's pretty much everything I can say about this. It's a re-write of my novel The Unseen which I'd started working on during the 5th grade and finished in the summer of my 6th. I'd given up on improving it or making it any better or even continuing the series but my brother encouraged me to keep working on it and one thing or another lead me to point where me and my brother are going to do a re-write of The Unseen...together.

He'll be writing the view of Seth and I'll be doing Filomena's. You might want to read the original sucky version to understand this one better so you can read it and actually see the improvement teehee. But its not necessary. =]

Well...I hope you enjoy. The chapters will be slow-moving since we're both kinda busy haha but hopefully, we'll get it finished one day. =P

Love you all.

Trish and Locke

P.S. Here's the link to the old one --> http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-unseen--the-sucky-version

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The Trinity (Series)

1. The Unseen
2. The Next Life
3. Apocalypse
4. The Other Side


This is the re-write. Has the same idea and story line but am hoping to make it better in terms of my original which was a complete failure [to me].

http://www.protagonize.com/story/the-unseen--the-sucky-version

That's the original and it might help if you read that first but it's long haha. 49 chapters. =P Take your time though lol.

But this is a collab between me and my brother. He'll be writing the view of Seth, and I - Filomena.

Critique is welcomed and comments, ratings and people willing to read will be much appreciated!

Happy Reading!

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Character Details

Filomena Sparks
Age: 18
Appearence: Long, silky black hair with dark hazelnut brown eyes. Slim and lean. Beautiful.
Personality: Friendly and nice. Loyal and trustworthy. Stands by her friends when they need her.
Powers: Telekinesis, Energy Manipulation
Trinity: Sparks

Seth Aloysius
Age: 18
Appearence:
Personality:
Powers: Time Manipulation
Trinity: Aloysius

updated Dec 26 '10 by Trish