(Regular POV)

Platina and Lily looked at the sprite of the girl who stopped Amaterasu from attacking the data bug. The sprite of the girl soon began to talk, “If you kill that bug, you’ll die right away without even being able to be awake from your current state, Miss. Arisa.”

 The sprite then turned to the data bug saying a small incantation. “So you should be careful Miss. Arisa when you attempt to kill this.” 

 Lily who soon heard that name, become shocked and demandingly asked, “Is it true? That Amaterasu is really Arisa?” Amaterasu looked away and Platina just nodded replying, “You could say Arisa is in coma now, like you just said. But her mind transferred her into the Universe. It’s a strange phenomenon you could say.”

 “So you mean she’s like what the rumors said? A lost soul but that’s too sudden!” Lily exclaimed and the sprite that didn’t speak at all soon said, “True. She maybe a lost soul but she’s a bit a exceptional.”

 “How am I exceptional! I saw this strange girl and then I get stuck in this world!” Amaterasu shouted being angry and looked at her chained hands. “I keep changing each time something happens and ---” Being soon cut off by the sprite of the girl who said, “That’s not what I meant. You know that girl you met two days ago? That was a spirit. She’s a physic. Like you, she’s in the hospital. She sent her spiritual self just tell you, because you could see her!”

 “Wait! How do you know about the President’s daughter?” Platina interrupted and soon said, “Whoops!”

 “What do you mean daughter?” asked Amaterasu and the sprite sighed. “The girl you met, Miss. Arisa, was the daughter of the President of the Company who owns the game and who made it.” “Then what are you? Cuz you’ve been bothering me for a little bit.”

 After hearing that the sprite began to be ticked but soon sighed. “I’ve been wondering a bit too.” Said Lily. The sprite smiled and floated a little higher saying, “ My name is Cerise. And I’m the sprite of my owner Jessi Markham, the daughter of the one who created the ‘Universe’ and like you Miss. Arisa, I’m a lost soul, or more likely a fragment of my owner Jessi.”

 “Wait… that girl Jessi is a lost soul? How?” the three of them asked and Cerise soon began to explain. “Miss. Jessi learned that her father’s game would be chaos in her dreams. The chaos is? Every single player will be in coma. Every single one and not even one player would wake up.”

 “Wait! She saw that in her dreams?” asked Amaterasu and then Cerise nodded soon explaining more. “Further in her dream she saw someone who looked liked you. Of the form you’ve changed just recently.”

 “She saw me in this form?” Amaterasu asked looking at her appearance. “Yes. She saw you in this form. So Miss. Jessi decided to bend some rules to her powers. By bending the rules of her powers she managed to bring in you to the Universe. But that made her go in to coma.”

 “What managed to make her go into coma anyway?” asked Platina being confused. “Don’t you get it? She got into coma from the bending the rules of her powers and over using her powers, and creating this book” Cerise explaining even more and then she snapped her fingers, a big book came into her hands bigger than her own size. “Is that the book that she made with her powers?” asked Lily pointing at the book in her hands.

Cerise nodded and floated near to Amaterasu and placed the book onto Amaterasu. The book had a purple velvet cover and the cover said, ‘The Breaker.’

 “Open it up Miss. Arisa.” Said Cerise and Amaterasu looked surprised. “Me?” “Yes. This is the gift for the warrior that Miss. Jessi dreamed of.” Cerise said smiling. “If you say so…”

 Amaterasu opened the book and then light came out showering on Amaterasu. 

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Author guidance for This story

The story's setting is in the future in the year 2030, and this is probably a going to be an on-going story since this is the beginning chapter. The future is the same like ours but no TVs or computers but high technology. The main character is named Arisa.

The story title is The Universe.

I wrote this story for Creative Writing class.

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Characters

Name: Arisa Bannings
Age: 16
BirthDate: May 14, 2014
Bio: She was somewhat ordinary you could say. She has average grades and loves sports. She takes up fencing and karate for sports. Arisa is the youngest in her family, with two older siblings, named Faith and Damian. She doesn't believe in supernatural things, until she wakes somewhere else.
Personality: outgoing, athletic, don't believe in supernatural, gets confused with technology
Username: Amaterasu

Name: Diana Sadahiro
Age: 16
BirthDate: September 5, 2014
Bio: She is the one who drags her best friend to many of her silly ideas, and she was the one that suggested to do two sports. She has average grades and she is that not smart. She is the oldest in her family with three younger siblings.
Personality: happy-go-lucky, athletic, believes in the supernatural, likes technology
Username: Lily

Name: Faith and Damian Bannings
Age: Faith's 18 Damian's 19
BirthDate: March 14, 2012 and December 10, 2011
Bio: the two of them are Arisa's siblings, and they make a funny team when their together. The two of them saw the girl when their going to the hospital but did not receive the same fate as their sister.

Name: Jessi Markham
Age: Around 17ish
Birthdate: Unknown
Bio: The mysterious girl that made Arisa faint and receive comatose .

Name: Sadie
Age: 16
Birthdate: November 1, 2014
Bio: (UNKNOWN FOR NOW)
Username: Platina

Name: Cerise
Age: 5
Race: Sprite
Birthdate: January 5
Bio: Cerise is a sprite that lives in the game and is helping Amaterasu through the game.

updated May 19 '11 by Seiaraa