The Unbelievables
"Hey, Holly. You think we should write a story"
"Ah yeah, that would be awesome"
"Yeah, we could have superheroes. Oh my god they could be the weakest superheros ever"
"Call it the unbelievables!!"
"We could have a completely normal girl called Kristy but who everyone calls Bob (for no pericular reason) and she could have a teacher who turns into a werecat!!!!!"
"Oh the main hero could be a shape shifting butterfly boy called Bruce with a secret love of tap dancing"
"Then he could his side kicks Frank the Mouse and Mino the Baby Frog"
"Mino could have machine guns!!!"
"Who else should be an enemy"
"Oh my god, the catterpillar of DOOOM!! Better known as... Steve"
"How about the EVIL hedgehog??"
"We could have both and The Pineapple!"
"A Pineapple???"
"No, THE Pineapple"
"Well, Whats it do??"
"It THE Pineapple!"
"Uh... whats its purpose??"
"Its just there!!!! Its THE Pineapple"
"Right..... Moving on then. How about they be after something???"
"Crackers!!!!"
"No, Holly seriously... what should they be after??"
"Cheesy Crackers!!!"
"Uh... that doesn't make sense"
"They could be Holy Crackers!!!! The mission is to spread glorious CHEESE all over them. mmmm...."
"HOLLY!! Oh, great I've lost her... Right time to start writing!"
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Wrote by Me and My friend Holly! Two Girls in a room decided to write a story. Little did they know they were controlling the life's of many strange beings.
You may think this is unbelievable because it is.
Characters
Kristy, everyone calls her Bob... god knows why. Doesn't want to be there. Always hungry.
Bruce.... The Heroic Butterfly!!! Secretly enjoy's tap dancing. He's good. He's very good.
Mrs Felix, the WERE....cat. She teaches!
Frank the Mouse... very muscly except when a mouse. He's on the side of good.
Mino the BABY frog. He secretly manufactures MACHINE GUNS!!! WOOO!!! (After nap time)
The Catapillar.... Of DOOM!!!! Or Steve... for short. Very Evil... Very Small.
The EVIL Hedgehog..... His secret power is!!!! (Intense Music)..... Sneezing!!!
The Holy (Cheese) Crackers... mmm, cheese.... HOLLY!!
And finally...
THE PINEAPPLE!!!!!
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was posted on Jul 24, 2010 by
CrystalRose.
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"Two Girls in a room decided to write a story. Little did they know they were con..."
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Fantasy, Humour, Just for Fun
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