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[Ed:  Didnt see the original 3 sentences... so I'm taking my liberty...]

Sam tipped closer to the edge of the building and felt his gorge rise.  One hundred and twenty feet across the intersection hadn't seemed that big a deal.  Now, he regretted the boast he'd made.

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