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...the opening in the forest and the first person she saw was a little girl running after a puppy. The little girl looked up at her, she noted the horror in the girls face and tried to force a smile through her dry cracked lips, which only seemed to cause her pain and scare the little girl more with her wincing face.
She saw the girl mouth "Mummy" And then turn on her heel and run in the opposite direction.
She said "Please don't leave" Feebley, and couldn't hear her own voice anyway, so wasn't sure what she had said anyway, and before she knew it she was on the floor. She was still delicate in her jumbled heap, but you have to admit she was on the floor. Her face was covered by jet black hair but you could still see the bruises.
Her clothes, although not designer were still flattering and pretty, even when she was on the floor.
The grass around her fallen body seemed to want to touch her and carress her.
She let it envelope and carress her as she rested.

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