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He stares at you, blankly, his face filled with sadness.

He then says "It's coming."

You ask him what, but he just keeps repeating the same thing, over and over "It's coming. It's coming."

Getting scared, you decide to head back to your house, but look round to see  your path blocked by all these screaming boys.

Panicking, you don't have many options

Do you:

Try and force your way through, hoping to make it back to safety

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NineMenOnRocks "I love this story- any path I choose makes me laugh about something or other."
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YellowHat17 "Strange"
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keptani "This is such a sad story!"
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Timbus "How do I hook up with those lezzers on the right."
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surreal78 "FYI - edit is available to the posts's author for 1 hour after a post is made, UNLESS someone's already branched it. If that's already happened, you're out of luck. ;)"
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Raz "It's a good thing there's an edit button then, Radlord (it appears on the top right but does not appear if there are any branches leading off of your post)"
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radlord "I may need an edit button soon, lest I make even more of an arse of myself with my awful spelling and typing."
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surreal78 "Hmm, those super long song lyrics with no punctuation are foiling my random excerpter. I'll have to do a little tweaking there. :)"
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Mass_Debate "you see the child smile for the first time*"

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