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Do you scream in pain?

You scream and scream but no words come out.

Panic grips you. Tears roll from your cheek and your skin begins to turn a feverish red.

Are you dreaming? The thought terrifies you and for a moment you forget your pain.

Then it comes flooding back and you try to scream again, only for a small orange to pop out of your mouth.

What now?

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NineMenOnRocks "I love this story- any path I choose makes me laugh about something or other."
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YellowHat17 "Strange"
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keptani "This is such a sad story!"
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Timbus "How do I hook up with those lezzers on the right."
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surreal78 "FYI - edit is available to the posts's author for 1 hour after a post is made, UNLESS someone's already branched it. If that's already happened, you're out of luck. ;)"
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Raz "It's a good thing there's an edit button then, Radlord (it appears on the top right but does not appear if there are any branches leading off of your post)"
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radlord "I may need an edit button soon, lest I make even more of an arse of myself with my awful spelling and typing."
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surreal78 "Hmm, those super long song lyrics with no punctuation are foiling my random excerpter. I'll have to do a little tweaking there. :)"
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Mass_Debate "you see the child smile for the first time*"

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