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Go outside and try to find out what was wrong with the boy

You go outside. Its a beautiful day. Cherry blossom floats serenely down from your tree. Spring snow your wife used to call it, before she stopped speaking.

You went up to the boy, and saw that it was your son. He was creaming because you were supposed to take him to school. You'd forgotten, again. He stopped screaming now that you had remembered, and he smiled.

He smiled.

It was beautiful.

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protagonize: author profile thumbnail for NineMenOnRocks "I love this story- any path I choose makes me laugh about something or other."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for YellowHat17 "Strange"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for keptani "This is such a sad story!"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Timbus "How do I hook up with those lezzers on the right."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "FYI - edit is available to the posts's author for 1 hour after a post is made, UNLESS someone's already branched it. If that's already happened, you're out of luck. ;)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Raz "It's a good thing there's an edit button then, Radlord (it appears on the top right but does not appear if there are any branches leading off of your post)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for radlord "I may need an edit button soon, lest I make even more of an arse of myself with my awful spelling and typing."
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for surreal78 "Hmm, those super long song lyrics with no punctuation are foiling my random excerpter. I'll have to do a little tweaking there. :)"
protagonize: author profile thumbnail for Mass_Debate "you see the child smile for the first time*"

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