Or go find the police and bring them here, if you can remember where here is, There are alot of similar caves around
As you make your way into town you realise something is wrong, cars have stopped in the middle in the middle of the road and children are sitting on the side-walk crying. As you are walking down the main road you see that all of the shops on either side of you are broken with the miniatures pouring out of them, you see the police station ahead of you, but things don't look good, the whole city is at a standstill, the miniatures have feasted on all of the adults, but have left the children alone, why?
You turn back as you realize that there is no point going to the police station, but you do stop off at the library, to try find some information on why these things are leaving the kids alone.
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"thanks, will do"
posted 18 days ago
by snowstormfir
"i like the way your going with this. i geuss the only thing i would change would maybe put a little more detail into the writing. you'll get a longer branch and you'll also give the reader a better picture of what your trying to portray"
posted 18 days ago
by wiggler05
"o yea please comment"
posted 19 days ago
by snowstormfir
"man this took a while, because I first wrote it in past tense and third person, then edited the whole thing"
posted 21 days ago
by snowstormfir
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