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...I can work out a plan to help them through. My arms out stretched either side of me, like walking the tight rope.

A splash behind me and a shout. I stand perfectly poised and still, and just turn my head slightly to take a look.

‘Its Jase’ Screams Sam. “he’s gone under’.

‘ok’ I shout. Thinking what do I do? Do I go on or turn back.

“he can’t get out’ ‘he’s gona drown,’ Sam is screaming. “the top is frozen solid, it wont let him out” Her screams going right through me.

What kinda crazy thing is this? I wonder, shouting to Sam to keep calm. If she is not careful she will go under too.

And then as if its all a dream, I’m transported back, into that room.

I look around, my papers in my hand. The group still stood there listening to my talk, but what was I saying.

Oh yes I remember, I was telling them about the Looking Glass.

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