One morning, days after the death of most of my family, I woke up. Both Jill and Roman were asleep. It was very cold, so I went to look for some firewood, to make it warmer. While searching for some firewood, I came upon a little hut. I heard a lot of talking and chattering, so I took a peek through the window. It was a party. With many people. So I grabbed the firewood and went to fetch my brother and sister.

When I got there, all I saw was dirt. Both my sister and brother were gone. I found a note that read," We know where you are, keep running, and we'll kill you." 

I only had one guess to who this could be, King Errahan! How foolish of me to leave my brother and sister here asleep! I should have known better. Oh well, all I knew was, I had to go and find them, dead or alive. But first, maybe I can get some help, from the party guests.

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There is currently only one character, Trey, and his anonymous family. Only two of his siblings are still alive, and his eight other siblings and his parents all died.
Characters:

Trey: 15 years old, male, currently in hiding from the king of Shadow Lake. Trying to find out what happened to his other two siblings and to get revenge on the king.

King Errahan: The king of Shadow Lake, very disliked, 52, male, fat, tyrant.

Jill: Trey's younger sister, 12, blonde, skinny, survivor from the attack of the king's guards

Roman: Trey's younger brother, 13, dark hair, skinny

updated Feb 20 '10 by badiban