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Onyx came to stand by me. "Why so glum?" she asked.

"They always care for Luke, all the time it's Luke, Luke, Luke. He does everything, that's why he's in that bed. He tries to act heroic, but he almost always winds up with broken bones."

She sighed. Great. Now someone was feeling sorry for me. I just stood there, willing myself to let myself go. I was barely aware of myself standing there, instead I was in the past,thinking of the people I used to know, the places I used  to live.

I had been a loner, then too. No one ever noticed me, my unremarkable looks, and the fact that I almost never spoke. I felt my blood boil. But I used to have one friend. One good friend, who had always knew what I was thinking. It almost hurt to remember, in fact, I had forgotten what he looked like.

I didn't return to myself for a long time. I strayed among memories, fuzzy though they were, wondering if I would ever see my old friend again.

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BlackxWaters Rules.
You may be Violet, Marcus, Luke, Janelle, Emily, Raider or Lilian if you want. YOu can also make up you own vampire charactor, or maybe even be a human. You pick. If you are being another vampire, if he/she is going outside, he/she must have something that protects he/she from the sun. He/she also needs some way to hide from the humans who know what vampires look like. Or maybe he/she is a brave vampire and doesn't care to hide? You pick. You be creative. And I"m also leaving their personalities and appearence up to you. You can make some of them really ugly if you like, or maybe all of them really beautiful?
It's up to you :)

Violet (dottilotti)Vampire
Appearence: Black wavy hair that covers most of her face, violet eyes, pale skin, and elf like facial structure.
Personality: Loves to sing, play the piano, and Luke. She would do anything for Luke, even give up her life for him.
Notes: She has a crush, or may even be in love, with Luke. She also plays the piano, sings, and used to be in a band.

Janelle (D. Daniels)Vampire
Appearence: Tiny Body
Personality: Clumsy
Notes: Can read minds

MarcusWas (BlackxWaters/Creater)Vampire
Appearence: Black shaggy hair, bright blue eyes, straight white teeth.
Personality: Arrogant, Flirty, Rude, Self Obsorbed, Selfish.
Notes: Likes Violet and is always trying to charm her. He is also the oldest in their group. He also dies.

Raider(Golden Lilac)Vampire
Appearence: short blonde hair, and blue green eyes
Personality: No one really realizes he's there and he is used to be the 'odd one out' or the third wealer' but he has the most common sense out of all of them.
Notes: nothin spiecal so far.

Emily(Anyone can use her, and if you want her, just ask :D) Vampire.
Appearence: ....
Personality: Happy, optimistic, kind of an air head, forgetful, and self absorbed.
Notes: Is the youngest vampire, but is still respectd by all exept Janelle. Her and Janelle really don't get along.

Belleza(UberEvilAngel)Vampire
Appearence: Long chocolate brown hair, baby blue eyes, and large red lips.
Personality: polite, gentle, kind, flirty, can be a bit of a tease.
Notes: Can heal with a kiss.

Doctor Limos(Harlot)Human
Appearance: gneeraly proper scientist wear. Usually behind polarized UV shifted sunglasses. His eyes underneath generally colour &%!% with his mood. His hair is long and well kept. Put into a ponytail behind his head. It is a nice black colour. His age seems slightly unplacable.
Personality: generally irritated on the situation presented here. Humans really are not that much better--yet they have decided that they are. Generally does not respect humans, and empathises and in most cases, outright sympathises with the nosferatu. Generally looking for a way to make their life styles easier, without taking away from humans. Would not cure Vampyrs any more than he'd try to cure homosexuality. Jilted in how he handles relationships. Generally very abrasive--and will state his mind when needed.
Notes: something happened involving his wife and the Hunters. Where his wife ended up dead. He generally wants to make things correct again.

Onyx (Nissa_FOREVER) half-blood
Appearence: Brown/Blonde hair, black eyes
Persona:Brave and fearless, jumps at the call of help, hardly ever feels sorry
Notes:Since being a half-blood she has the special abbilaties of the vamps, but has the emotions of a human

Ellicia(PoetChick95) human
Appearence: Unknown
Personality: Doesn't agree with her father about killing vampires.
Notes: Has mesmerizing eyes.

Fiona Limos-Succubus Varient Vampyr
Appearance: Very thin. She has not eaten in a while. She is not so much something that feasts on blood. As much as being around happy people. The more people that are enjoying themselves, the more healthy she looks. Her hair is black, and down to her butt. Her eyes are the same colour shifting eyes of Doctor Limos. They will likely see her wearing rags. She also has a darker coloured skin.
Personality: Hungry. When people around her are not happy, she starts eating normal food--and lots of it. But it never satisfies. As well, it really does not help her out. She is somewhat remorseful--thinking about a lost loved one. She is fairly certain her husband is dead. As she was hunted down herself, when the note came for her termination. She and her husband nearly escaped, when her husband was recaptured. While her husband was not a vampyr--she does not think they would have let him live.
Notes: You guessed it Doctor Limos' lost wife. The one that the good Doctor thinks is dead. Doctor Limos did end up dealing with who put that note through to terminate Fiona(who is Mister Poros' daughter BTW). Suffice to say, that person got the boot pretty bad. Doctor Limos and Mister Poros were working on some way to cure vampyrism. During the research Fiona was attacked by a vampyr and turned. After some reluctantness, Fiona ended up getting signed up to be cured. Then somebody who hates vampyrs in the firm put an order to destroy her. Doctor Limos tries to escape with Fiona--and well... both think the other is dead.

Sydney (BlackxWaters) Vampire
Appearence: Green Eyes, Long curly brown hair, pale pale skin.
Personality: Fearless, a bit of a Love lorn, tries to rebel against everything and anything, is always ignored and zones often. One of her strongest belief is that vampires never should have came to Earth and that they are a menace and they should alll be destroyed. Of course this is quite hard to get across to some one when she herself is a vampire.
Notes: Has the power to know everyone's name just by summoning her vampire powers, and she can also make vampire hunter guns. She can steal energy away from people, and make any object fall to pieces just by snapping her fingers. Marcus is also her fiance.

Ivy (Element) New vampire
Appearence: Ice blue eye, blonde hair, shoulder blade length.
Personlaity: ...
Notes: Was human until recently, is now vampire enough not to get bitten but no more than that. This is also means she gets hunted, and not having the abilities of a vampire, she has nearly been killed every time she has been hunted.

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