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Chapter 10: Lovemature

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"'Baby, I'm so sorry. I should never have made you get on that ride. I'm sorry. I know you can't read this but I need to say it. I am so sorry. I love you.'" Sophie read from her phone, choking back yet more tears.

"This shouldn't be happening." was all that Lollie could say. "Something's gone wrong. Something, somewhere has gone wrong."

"You sound angry... I'm sorry. The other one is from my mum. It says that she loves me.. So, what happened to you?" Sophie said quietly, slightly afraid of the hint of anger that rang out when Lollie spoke.

Lollie paused, unsure of what to say. Sophie let the silence linger for a few minutes before coughing, apologetically. "I'm sorry. I'll understand if you don't want to talk about it..." Sophie said, allowing her statement to sink in for a while. "Lollie..?" Sophie questioned.

"Sorry." Lollie said, quietly. Tears were forming in the corner of her eyes.

"You can't do this to me!" he had said, his heart breaking.

Lollie shook her head, trying to rid it of the memory.

"I won't let you" he said, determinedly.

Tears streamed down her face as she remembered the only person she had ever loved.

"I love you," he said, sticking the knife into her.

The End
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"The Last Fairground" may have ended, but the story continues in the two sequels:

"War of the Bloodless Gun"
http://www.protagonize.com/story/war-of-the-bloodless-gun

"Line of Sight"
Coming Soon

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A long time ago, a girl died. She was killed. But she's still here, looking for revenge.
Life may suck, but death is far worse.

Lollie
Current Status: Deceased
Cause of Death: Stabbed
Bio: Lollie died a long time ago. Now she helps the newly deceased find a way to move on. But she has a couple of secrets hidden away. Her mysterious past is shrouded in mystery, but its something that she's now trying to make up for.

Sophie
Current Status: Deceased
Cause of Death: Accident on the Ferris Wheel
Bio: Sophie was an innocent. She hadn't ever really done anything wrong, but after a fateful accident, she was thrust into a world of the dead who were still haunting Earth. Despite making friends with Lollie, she decided to spend the rest of eternity with her boyfriend, Finn. That is before she started to fade.

Finn
Current Status: Alive
Bio: Finn was enjoying a date with Sophie when his life was turned upside down. He lost her but then he found her again, despite her being dead. After spending time together, he is afraid of losing her again and isn't sure to what lengths he'll go to save her.

Amber
Current Status: Deceased
Bio: Amber has always been a hyperactive, energetic person in both life and death, even despite her unresolved issues. She feels safe at the graveyard, only venturing out when something is seriously wrong. And now, it is.

Rosie
Current Status: Alive
Bio: Rosie had only recently been promoted to the rank of Detective in the police force, with the 'Helter Skelter Massacre' being her first case. Despite that not going terribly well, she has met a long dead relative and discovered a plot to kill more than three teenage girls. Someone has a vendetta and she is one of the intended victims.

Aaron
Current Status: Alive
Bio: Aaron and Rosie had been seeing each other for a couple of weeks before she was thrust into a world of death and destruction which changed her. Now, she doesn't have the time for him and that frustrates him. But he is about to be drawn into a world where there's no way out.

Beverly
Current Status: Deceased
Cause of Death: Blunt Trauma
Bio: One of the Helter Skelter Massacre victims, Bev has a couple of secrets from her life that she isn't quite ready to share. But this world has a lot more in store for this confident, beautiful young girl. When life doesn't give you what you want, sometimes death does.

Susanna
Current Status: Deceased and Moved On
Cause of Death: Strangulation
Bio: The last victim of the Helter Skelter Massacre, Suzy is on track to finding inner peace with her shame out in the open. But will she get the chance to move on, or is there one more surprise in store for her?

Christina
Current Status: Destroyed
Cause of Death: Blood loss
Bio: A confident and often annoying girl, Christina was the second victim of the Helter Skelter Massacre and, instead of befriending the other girls, she rejected them and so was caught by Clive. Once he had finished with her, he destroyed her after she tried to defy him, proving that there is a fate worse than death.

Clive
Current Status: Deceased
Cause of Death: Trampled by Horses
Bio: After causing his own death in the past, Clive has remained on Earth to seek revenge on Lollie after she ran away from him. But over the years, Clive has developed control over his situation and can easily use his power to cause pain on others. He wants revenge and nothing in this world can stop him.

Ayako
Current Status: Deceased
Cause of Death: Hit and Run Accident
Bio: After running away from home, Ayako wanted to find fame but instead, she found a whole other world beyond life. But it isn't quite as simple as that, as Kiyoko is soon to find out.

Kiyoko
Current Status: Deceased
Cause of Death: As yet, unknown
Bio: After dying years ago, she has got used to being dead and has made a life out of it, helping other spirits pass on, much like Lollie. But her past too has a dark side that is coming back for her.

Ronaldo and Eloise
Current Status: Alive
Bio: Not much is known about these two mysterious individuals other than the fact that they once worked with Taylor as a part of The Bloodless Gun, a mysterious organisation with agents that have orders to kill anyone that stands in their way.

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