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...word on this Flame Weaver ?"

Kai looked, really looked at his captor for the first time and was struck by her beauty. Her eyes, so large and all encompassing, radiated with a passion for life yet behind that was deep rooted pain that she would never be free of. The way her hair cascaded down the lithe form and swayed with the slightest breeze made it seem it had a life all its own. Her smile lit up her already beautiful face into something the Gods themselves might worship. Staring at the smile that was quickly turning into a frown, Kai just barely heard,"Flame Weaver ?

Kai quickly snapped out of his adoration, wishing his cheeks where not burning quite so hot in embarrassment. " You have my word Terran."  the ground opened but as he tried to climb out he was knocked down and instantly lost in complete darkness.

"What the ....." he started to yell but a small hand clamped firmly over his mouth.

"Shhhhhh be quiet, your people are here.

Jaycelynn helps Kai escape

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