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.... Kai screamed, not from physical pain but from the anguish of losing the inner spark he had known all his life. Tears streamed down his face as well as most of the Weavers as they stole his spark. It was over in a few moments but to everyone in the village it seemed to last much, much longer.

Kai was left shivering in a heap where he lay as the circles broke apart. Kai's mother ran to her disgraced son and carried him back to their hut. Kai had never known such cold. His teeth chattered and his body shuddered even though the day was very warm. His mother covered him with all the blankets they had and left him to sleep.

Kai awoke suddenly, feeling much too warm with all the blankets on him, he threw them off and stood up famished. Strange he thought, all the stories he had heard spoke of the dowsed being near death for several weeks and only eating when it was forced upon them. Kai went to find food, not knowing that his eyes had once again turned into dancing flames.

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