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The years had eroded her memory. All anyone knew about her was that which she could recall about herself.

Once she was immensely powerful. A fireweaver of unparralleled ability. Her name was lost. Her age was lost. She called herself the fire feeder. Sustaining her life involved draining power from other, less magnificent creatures. She had consumed the lives of countless beasts, people and animals alike.

Like the flame that birthed her, the more powerful she grew, the more fuel she required to keep herself alight. Her entire being was given over to consumption and death. She flitted on the air like a breath, and her passing meant only destruction.

She revelled in it.

But she grew old.

Time binds all. This much she knew. She had sensed the boy some time ago, tasted his power. The urge to slake her evil thirst was almost unbearable. It was all she could do to hold her own instinctive will to absorb him in check.

No. She sought a different destiny for this one. She sought not a meal, nor a victim.

She sought a student.

The fire feeder purred to herself. A baby. A killer. Trained and schooled in her skill and understanding of death, but taught restraint and control.

He had shown that his power could be reigned in. A trait that the fire feeder herself found almost impossible.

If he had failed to control himself, the fire feeder would have murdered him, and the entire settlement.

She purred a soot ridden coo to herself, the depth of her insanity comforting her...

No. She would wait. She would creep, and cajole, and capture his heart.

Then she would make him immortal.

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Taylos "Sorry I have taken so long to make a post. I am glad I have piqued your interest."
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Rac7hel "ooo... exciting!"
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Rac7hel "I figured he would make it all the way around eventually. This reminds me of Avatar: The Last Airbender on Nickelodeon. (which, I might add, I LOVE!)"
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Taylos "it is all good, I am taking him to the Wind Walkers at some point in time"
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Rac7hel "Oh I bet they'll make it if they work together"
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Jillian "Haha, sometimes I can't help myself; plus it had been posted for a few days without any follow-ups so I figured no one would mind.
But my main purpose for sending him to the Terran's was to perhaps find himself a companion, ie. the girl, who has her own little back story and motives, etc.
Now that I think of it, I never really intended for him to actually make it to the Water Lords; I just assumed something would happen that would foil his plans, no matter where he went.
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Rac7hel "It's cool, I just might have to double-post my own branch like you did yours ;) Or... wait until he leaves the Terrans and then take him to the Water Lords from there. I just figured it would be really obvious to him that they would send word to the Terrans, and that he wouldn't be safe there. But I guess there's no harm in trying... OR IS THERE?!"
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Jillian "eek...sorry. I really enjoyed your branch but I had an idea that fitted with this direction so I went with it."
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Adam "This story is really well paced and inspiring. I have added something interesting on the passed the test thread."
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Taylos "Thank you very much, it was kind of a spur of the moment thing."
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Jillian "Love the addition of the other elemental clans!! Nicely done. This story is really turning out to be great!"

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