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by Fairyjo in Fantasy added April 4, 2008

someone watching

She had watched him...

She could smell the power he had...

Her body trembled, as he succeeded each task... the pitiful tasks they made him complete, he could do so much more... he should do so much more.

Her hair was the colour of the fire itself, it covered her features a bit but her eyes stood out. Large eyes which seemed to swallow you glinted in the firelight.

Here in this place, at this time, he had come, the greatest of all those given the gift.

He had a destiny... she could wait...

Without anyone noticing she vanished, leaving behind only a scorch in the ground where she had stood.

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