The Day On The Train

I was told to put emotion into my work, so i tried. Sorry if its not very good.

I remember the day when

We jumped on a train

It was simply passing through

While we walked in the rain

It only stopped for a moment

But it was just enough time

We got on without thinking twice 

But we knew it was a crime

We didnt really care 

We just wanted to run

That day made me happy

I was really having fun

It was the best day of my life

No bad thoughts in our minds

We just sat with each other

And left our fear behind

It was the one day i was happy

No longer blind, i saw beauty

I still remember our day on the train

Even now that youve left me

The End

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