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...d been shallow and his face an awful shade of milky white.  He had moaned and groaned for ages, but in the last half hour or so had fallen silent.  Callum hoped that he had just passed out.  After the shooting they had sealed the damned place and now what should have been a freaking simple heist, had become a hostage situation.

And Sly, well he was enjoying this.  Callum hadn't wanted the madman to come, but no, Howard his damned cousin, refused to do the job unless Sly was brought in.  Howard had insisted they needed him, after all he was a great wheel man.  What a shame though that he was a borderline psycho.

So the three of them had the bank staff and half a dozen customers hostage, and it was going too hell in a hand basket.

Surely things couldn't get any worse could it?  They had no idea about the Dark Night, who even now, was gaining entrance too the building via the skylight......

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ganga "Aah.. a good superhero story! Batman is cool, but I prefer Superman ;)"
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surreal78 "Eloquently written. I'll be reading this one. :)"
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Writers_Block "I'm as much for batman stories as the next guy, hell, God knows theres enough of them out there, I even gave this a five! But couldn't the title have been a little different from the newest movie coming out?

On a side note I will be posting a branch, I plan to bring bane into this!
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