All about Adam and Eve

It’s a shame; if you had been there you could have witnessed first hand the brilliance of the moment, the fire racing into existence. In the very beginning we were born into the everything because we were the nothing. A faint heart throbbing with in a black chest of universe before existence, all was muted but the birth. Watch now as a small spark of light appears on crisp uncharted horizon. Such a beautiful pains this creation, burning away the nothing as light spreads across the empty plain. It was never to be seen, but slowly it grows, throbbing it grows with no one to witness it but you now.

You see we were the nothing because we had everything; we needed for nothing because we fulfilled the everything. We began unto this world perfectly complete.

Oh now don’t miss it, see the orb of light? It pauses, ebs then mutes and slowly as if under water it begins to falter rippling out, it becomes so bright no eyes can watch as it explodes. You weren’t there but now can you see it? The face, flying through the darkness it is the first face, the face of time itself. You could have watched it from birth had you been there, though too quickly it would have aged and then death and flying into dust across the blackness. But it was Eden we found as we fell from time into the garden, and Adam then Eve. You could have watched as they sat across from each other staring into each other’s eyes, both reaching for each other but neither could touch, not yet that is. Not a tiny fresh hair would they know.

What if you were Eve? How would you feel pulled from, looking, finding your Adam for the first time? Scared? Hungry? Hungry for his hands, his smile, would he be the one? How would you know? For his eyes, to look into see the universe you were apart of alone. Before the knowledge would we be more or less aware? how do we know what that must feel like to come into existence in a moment and never know we were once complete. To Adam would you be beautiful? His eyes alone to see you? Would he know who you were? Could you be so alone hungry for knowledge yet unwilling to reach out and grab from the tree your own existence that which will bring both together, require both to shame.

But you are not, you may only look out and see the Adam so brooding with virility masculinity as he leans in, both will bite into opposite sides of the juicy fruit. The fruit explodes, as with the bang itself and the lovers will embrace for the first time. Then again it moves too quickly, Eves hair grows unreasonably long covering her body then the shame, Adam's nudity obscured by branches and rocks, he grows older and the two grow apart. Children will burst from behind trees and age as they run, from frame to frame laughing crying at once. Then we are back to the moment they first touch. They kiss long, that first kiss. And they begin to lie.

From Eve’s very lips you would hear her too question, “Without knowledge or past did you taste my breath? Did you long for me the same I have long waited for you? Was my soul able to be filled by our own, to be one once more? Was the moment wrong, or are we now alive?” 

Adam holding out a hand to his newfound prize, his other, his own body inverted to fit his need. “I too have waited dear Eve, and plucked you from with in me as you too plucked from the tree that which filled us both with knowing. From within me you held a place beneath my heart I have only moved you closer and once more we shall be reunited.”

The two will lie back as regular husband and wife would do, they will bring forth that which again will bring forth. But today after the long journey together they lay, closing their eyes as one, Eve will rest her head against the missing piece she once was. Adam will stroke the long locks, which will cover her shame, and together they will lay alone as one, only lay. Later the lies.

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Author guidance for This story

I was inspired by the idea that all people have had the same conversations (or at least interacted similarly) since the dawn of time... I wanted to impart regular everyday situations (i.e. a husband and wife going to bed at night) into obscurest situations.. I think this could be FUN, join in at anytime and let me know how the conversations would go. I want it to be linear but random, your chapter does not need to pick up where the last left but should should follow the timeline of human evolution.

updated May 8 '09 by wickedmirror