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by tfoe in Literary added April 2, 2008

Traffic delay

Much as suspected the bottleneck of parents with kids that missed the bus like his own, and yuppies trying to get to the coffee house, have completely plugged up the intersections between school and home by their inability to use their own eyesight properly.

Always willing to vent frustration when alone in the car, its quite another matter when they are in it. His inner soul wants to rant about how stupid these people are, but he is forced to bite his lip and stay quiet.

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