protagonize: interactive fiction & collaborative story writing community
Get more out of Protagonize! Login or sign up as member.
Show Previous branch Teaser
...p>

I loved him and it hurt so much. But now he didn’t want me.

I took the razor and traced a fine line across my wrist first. Imagining the cut. Feeling the wine fill my blood, making my head whoozie.

Clearing my mind of all thoughts.

I traced the razor again over my wrist, but this time applying pressure.

The first cut hurt the most, as I drew it across my wrist.

I sucked in my breathe. The pain sweeping through me and somehow the relief.

How mad does that sound, as I watch my blood drip into the bath, my arm leaning on the side.

My blood dripping into the water and emerging in it. Sliced through the skin on my other wrist, before I changed my mind, and quickly poured another glass of wine.

Downing it in one, and then pouring another.

And then lay back down, watching my blood drip into the bath, changing the colour of the bath from clear to a pale pink.

Slowly closing my eyes as my sleep washed over me.

The angel will wait.mature

Uh oh. No one's written this branch yet. :o

Have questions about writing a new story, branch or chapter? Check out the posting rules to the right for an idea of what you should and shouldn't do.

Feeling brave? Login and post a new story below!

POST A COMMENT

Wanna say something? Make yourself heard!
We reserve the right to delete spam, flames, or other nasty stuff.

Please login or register to post a comment.

15 COMMENTS ABOUT THIS STORY RSS

POSTING GUIDELINES

STORY TAGS

STORY POPULARITY

Need a little inspiration? Check this out:
excerpt from The Tail of God   by Bannalor

2 PARTICIPANTS IN THIS STORY

RELATED STORIES RSS

mongolian briefmature

The Return of Chastity-Anne

Riddles

Flirting with Danger

Call of Another Man (Monologue)

THE GOODS

Start writing now! Register for a free Protagonize account

STORY CATEGORIES

Support This Site

SPREAD THE WORD!