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by Tasha_Noble in Poetry added June 13, 2008

venice sucks

 La Serenissima

Non e bellissima

Sure, it's pretty

but ''il turismo''

and molto rip-offismo

Detracts from the beauty.

ps.  These aren't really my sentiments - mi piace molto Venezia...

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