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Over the lifeless, gray sky, Check-Mark argued with UV-Ray.

"We have to get those vermn now!" Check-Mark argued. :Screw your goddamn pln!"

UV-RAY merely puffed his pipe again. "I think that my plan will be much more...efficient. He then blew a smoke ring towards the sky. As Check-Mark gazed upwards he gasped. What appeared to be a large shooting star came plummeting down to earth. It was ablze and heahded directly for the clearing under Check-Mark and UV-Ray. UV-ray covered his eyes as it impacted the earth, sending a shockwave of dust into their direction. Check-Mark scred as he was sent flying back into thier cave. UV-Ray shook his head and looked over at the crashed meteor. Only it wastn't a metor. It was a strange looking bird with mettalic skin instead of feathers. Suddenly, it's head bursted open and three figures began to emerge from it. UV-RAY gasped and ducked his head.

Lt. Terrance Raynor shook his head. He peered behind him and saw his friend Sgt. Jason Stars and his fellow Liutenant, Damien Fields climb out of the ship. They were bruised and battered but alright.

"Everyone okay?" Jim asked.

"Affirmitive" Damien answered.

"Son of a b**** i'm hurting like hell but fine." Jason complained. Terrance chuckled then picked up a battle rifle by his side. It was a standard army gun, with automatic firing and a mini-grenade launcher. Jason picked up a rifle identical to his but Damien picked up a large sniper rifle with a modified scope. Jason pulled out a scanner and it began to beep, sensing for any life forms.

"Wow." Jason said. "Seems for another hundred miles, we're the only living things." Terrance gasped and stared at the gray sky. Where were they? And how did their ship suddenly plot its coordinates here.

"Ship system's fried too. Radio, coordinator, weapons systems, all down." Damien reported. Terrance scratched his head again. "Jason, set up a perimeter and Damien check what supplies we have. We could be here a long time." Terrance ordered. The two soldiers nodded and began to work.

"Raynor, we have enough food supplies to last us 2 months and enoguh ammo to last about 10 reloads each." Damien spoke. He glanced at the supply crate again. "We also got two extra rifles and about 10 pairs of frag grenades."

Suddenly an explosion bombarded their ears. It was soon followed by a yell and gunshots. Terrance and Damien then picked up rifles and began to hury to assit Jason. They ducked behind rocks and saw Jason doing so as well. There was the sound of a rock being slung at them, at a dangerous velocity. Terrance and Jason began to fire back when Damien slunk form the batle. He began to sneak back to the ship, flipping his gun to slienced mode. He then peeked over a rock and saw a boy sneaking through their supplies. Damien slowly dropped his gun, whipped out a glowing laser knife and began to sneak on the boy.

"What strange objects." UV-Ray thought. He then picked up what seemed to be a small, circular object when a strong pair of arms wrapped themselves around his neck. A glowing blade was inching ever closer to his neck.

"Drop it and stay quiet kid," Damien ordered. "Otherwise i run you through."

The End
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PaulMacklin TEAM PROTAGONIZE

Team Protagonize is about introducing your characters, from other stories you have written and placing them in a new story together. Currently there is only this story - The Darkness - but I will be thinking of new stories soon!


THE STORY SO FAR

The motley crew - Team Protagonize, are nearing an end, Issac has strange powers, he's a gateway? Will Vade, the Phoenix make an appearance? Where have the team from Silicon valley gone? What is Zanaria up to? Who is Mercuria? Will the team manage to defeat Kaos?

To find out, keep on reading The Darkness!


THE GOOD

Autumn 17 - - - (ElzuWolfe)
Currently, her soul is trapped inside of Lisle's being, so she acts as a second mind.
Autumn is from a Novel in the making – Chaos

Isaac 14 - - - (ChaosBeing)
Isaac is pyrokinetic and has lived his life mostly as an outcast. He has good instincts on who to trust, and if he thinks you can help you're bound to become friends eventually. He is from the story "Where The Embers Glow"

Lisle 9- - - (Traxisk)


Lisle is a stray soul that had been granted a body in Ezin's realm; she was an Elemental able to control darkness. Lisle's body has since been seized by her twin, and her spectral form is severely weakened, but it's unknown whether she remains an Elemental. - Lisle is from a short story called "Twinned", not available on Protagonize.

Mike Craw 83 - - -(Craziantix)
A piecemeal raptor, very intellectual but prefers saving his life over doing the right thing.
From "Quest Of The Datateam"

Moonal - - - (ElzuWolfe)
Moonal is the immortal guardian of time, he is a pacifist at heart, but cannot stand failing in helping others… Moonal has some rather large secrets… – Moonal is from a Novel in the making – Aeon

Sedusa 24 - - -(Craziantix)
A mermaid who was thrown out of her colony and nurses a grudge against her family.
From "Quest Of The Datateam"

Silver 3.8 Billion- - - (ElzuWolfe)
Silver is a renegade angel with an extremely dark past, he fights for all the right things, but is often blinded by his anonymous master. – Silver is from a Novel in the making – Chaos

The Angel of Torn Skirts - - - (Craziantix)
An angel recently fired from his post at the Ministry. Essentially good in all his dealings but nurses secrets.
From "Quest Of The Datateam"

THE UNSURE

Alastor - - - (Mike_itong)
Once arrogant and ruthless, Alastor thought he was the most powerful of all demons, however as events come to pass his alliance with those set out on a mission of good has become more tempting.

Count Vladislau Rokkhans 32 - - -(Craziantix)
A Rushyan centaur and landowner who was once very rich but has since lost his wealth and his wife, Lyra. A moody but pacifist fellow.
From "Quest Of The Datateam"

Crexnettle -3 - - -(Craziantix)
An undead bird who is truly neutral about good and bad, but will do anything to himself out of trouble.
From "Quest Of The Datateam"

Mike Craw 83 - - -(Craziantix)
A piecemeal raptor, very intellectual but prefers saving his life over doing the right thing.
From "Quest Of The Datateam"

Zanaria circa 17 - - - (buddy123002)

Zanaria is an eagle human. He has a quick temper and is also quick to pull out a weapon. He doesn't know what side the is on, he is in a constant flux between Good and Evil.


THE BAD

Alix 9- - - (Traxisk)

Alix is human, though at the moment she's controlled by the Darkness through those bugs. She can dissipate her body at will to become sheer darkness. - Alix is from a short story called "Twinned", not available on Protagonize.


Kaos- - - (ElzuWolfe)
Kaos is the immortal guardian of death, however he lost all hope and goodness when his heart was broken by a mysterious female immortal. Kaos is now a highly intelligent, cruel being, the very epitome of evil. – Kaos is from a Novel in the making – Chaos

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