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...found this difficult to understand, when the banks seemed to own everything one way or another, but the emergency light was urging them on to the scene of the crime and they had no time for reflection!

Raven and Metalicus ran to the garage where their headquarters lay hidden behind the washing machine in the corner. Using the principles of physics, and applying them to nano technology, Alan had learned to multiply the potential mass of an atom by firing it with helium through a vacuum in a wind tunnel. This, had created an "Open door world,"  where behind the washing machine there appeared the door to their head quarters!

They both ran through the open door and up the flights of stairs, flung open the upstairs window and flew out into the night sky to fight evil where ever in might lurk! However, as the night wore on, and their arms tired, nagging doubts crept into both their minds as to wether or not this really was the best way to fight corporate crime.

They get arm ache and stop for a rest.

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jait No guidance necessary for this story except that, perhaps, I'd really like to avoid this becoming a tawdry costume-fetish story...

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