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...the electronic locks in the car release. He withdrew his finger, grinning. "God-damn." he said, proudly.
"Al--Metallicus" Raven's voice came from a distance.
"Raven!" Metallicus called out, "I've got the key. Never mind how. Let's get ready to roll!"
"Um, Honey." Raven called out. "There's some folks here to see us..."
Metallicus stomped up the ramp of the parkade until he could see the five men in black riot gear spread out around Raven. They had shiny silver rifles and black masks that covered their lips and noses. They looked like they might actually know what they were doing.
Metallicus frowned. The one directly in front of Raven was bigger than the others--he wasn't a minion; he was a Henchman.
"What do they want?" Metallicus called out.
"Al--Metallicus" Raven's voice came from a distance.
"Raven!" Metallicus called out, "I've got the key. Never mind how. Let's get ready to roll!"
"Um, Honey." Raven called out. "There's some folks here to see us..."
Metallicus stomped up the ramp of the parkade until he could see the five men in black riot gear spread out around Raven. They had shiny silver rifles and black masks that covered their lips and noses. They looked like they might actually know what they were doing.
Metallicus frowned. The one directly in front of Raven was bigger than the others--he wasn't a minion; he was a Henchman.
"What do they want?" Metallicus called out.
The Henchman's eyes didn't leave Raven. This was bad.
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