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...sp;  He stood upright and looked across the car at her.

"Emma", said Mettalicus

"Yes, Metallicus", said Raven, putting a sultry spin on her lover's name.

"Tonight, we start anew!  Criminals but be wary!  For, tonight, Metallicus and Raven paint the sky!"

Paint the sky?  Raven wondered where that came from but nodded with him and pumped one fist in the air.

"Metallicus needs some keys, dear Raven", said Alan, one hand on his hips, one hand offered up in the air, in a gesture to receive.

"Didn't you grab them?", asked Emma.

"You know I don't have pockets", purred Metallicus.

"Aaaah, there they are.", said Raven sweetly.

"Well, then, toss them here, we must be off"

"Oh, Metallicus, I'm afraid I can't do that"

"For whatever why not?", thundered Metallica impatiently.

"Because, Alan, it seems you have locked the damned car keys, in the car, again"

Back up the elevator!

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jait No guidance necessary for this story except that, perhaps, I'd really like to avoid this becoming a tawdry costume-fetish story...

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