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...something altough he was not sure all he could make out was the word "Jacob", "that must be his name" jamie thought to himself.

The next few minutes seemed like an eternity for Jamie as he watched his mum and jacob fight. All he saw was his mum fall to the ground then the light caught someting in Jacobs hand. Jamie knew what it was, his small body trembled as he realised what was happening!

He shuffled back as far as he could into the corner and covered his ears his little heart was racing but he could still hear his mothers screams as Jacob thrust the knife in over again, then after what seemed like forever there was silence. He got the courage to look just in case his mum was ok but all he saw was her body, limp and lifeless. Jacob standing over her! Jamie looked up, is eyes met the strange mans. As the moonlight shone through the window onto jacobs face he threw his hood over his head and with one last evil stare he turned and calmly walked out!

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