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...es stated with a tone of grim finality that made George nervous. "Are you sure he doesn't remember anything?" James enquired, nodding over to Simon, "he's been awfully quiet since we came to, y'know."

"I'm sure he'd tell us if he knew how, where or why we crashed. He's just tired and I think he may have a concussion."

"I concur." Summer added with a warm, genuine smile.

James rolled his eyes so that only George could see and carried on.

"If we collect some big rocks and branches, and put help signs all along the beach, that'd be a start, then we can start a fire at dusk and make a better shelter." He stated again, taking control of the situation.

George's mouth twitched ever so slightly as he bit his tongue. He knew it was a good idea, he just wished he had suggested it. He wondered if Summer had noticed his defined abs before he realised James had walked over to Simon and was calling out for him.

"George!" He shouted hoarsely, "come here!"

The Transformation of Simon Goodwin

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LukeRyan This is just intended to be a fun little story about a group of people who're stranded on a desert island, quite a cliche, yet that's why it's fun for me.

Feel free to take it wherever you want, it'd be cool to have some mystery involved in the adventure but I really don't mind, just have fun! :)

Characters(so far):

George Goodwin: The main character for the story, mainly told from his viewpoint.
Simon Goodwin: Younger brother of George, in teens.
James: George's apparent travelling companion.
Summer: Dreamy, pretty, and optimistic girl who is also travelling with them for some reason.

Basically giving you free reign to take it from here, and I hope someone will! :)

Luke

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