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...r the four elements.  I tried working with Water today, and the results have me struggling to breathe even now.  I am not the one to carry that burden.

There is a time of darkness coming, an upheaval of immense proportions.  And one of the daughters of the line of Evelyn Darcy will master the four elements.  I weep for my unborn child and, selfishly, I pray it is not her.

-- Rachel Darcy"

Sara's breath caught in her throat.  Rachel Darcy was her grand-mother's name.    Sara had never known her family.  She'd always been told that her mother and father had loved her very much, but that there had been an accident when she was a child and a fire had left her the only survivor. 

The last entries were dated only five years before...  By a woman named Janelle.  This, she reasoned, would be the sister her fathers' letter had mentioned.

Noone else had ever mentioned a sister.

Sara tries some spells from the Book of Shadows...

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Writers_Block "This definitely reminds me of my writing when I was your age now that I read it.
Jesus, its like you're a female me. I totally wrote these types of stories. What you need to do is focus more on where your character is going and try to keep it a little less detailed. Too much detail can be a bad thing.
Otherwise I love the story idea its very ambitious and adventurous. If you're having a problem with your writing download firefox. It underlines misspelled words in red and you can right click and it will give you the proper spelling exactly like in microsoft word. Its a very useful browser. Go to download.com and search for it, thats the safest way to download!
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jait "At first, I was a little harsh with my rating of "Sparkle Dust", but then I noticed the original author is twelve years old. Damn! I wish I wrote like this when I was twelve!"

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