Sorry
Inside I'm torn apart
Fighting for a life that gad yet to start
I search for words
Mischievous thoughts ran though my head
You're insignificant, better off dead
I would be caught convincing myself
I never stopped myself, just let the blade
Draw across my wrists, let it cut away
As a crimson colored substance
Poured from me, just as it did earlier the other day.
You saw the markings and could not find the words to say
However, I knew exactly what to say
I'm sorry.
Sorry for not being perfect
Sorry for being ugly
Sorry for not skinny enough
I am sorry for ever wanting you,
And believing that you wanted me.
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was posted on March 19, 2008 by
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I'll enjoy it or I won't, but I won't rate poetry.
By commenting on it or adding branches to it, I figure it increases the story's potential exposure , if only by throwing it up on the Recent activity" list... And I won't do that if i think the poetry sucks."
I love my girlfriend and she has my heart but if she ever broke my heart I'd never hurt myself over it because that just gives her all the power.
Beautiful writing though, powerful and indepth. Keep going with it but try your hand as novels. Poetry is good but it doesn't take you very far!
I'm giving this a five."
i am just insecure about what I write.. and scared to put it up online..
thought you ment something bad by saying "whee poetry!"
sorry
I like your branch
it's really good!!"
I thought it might be neat to build a story through branches of poetry... Have I given offense by commenting on and adding to your story-root?"